If you have some writing you’d like cleaned up, we can do that too. “About” pages can be a deep, dark hole if you aren’t careful; let’s take your thoughts and make them sparkle. Here are two examples of before and after client-written About pages.
Example :
The before:
The amygdala is the seat of our emotions and does not have a voice, so clients often can’t explain how they feel. Essential oils can cross the blood brain barrier very quickly and we are able to bring those emotions forward to be released quickly and affectively.
The after:
The seat of our emotions is in a part of the brain called the amygdala. It doesn’t speak and it doesn’t have a voice, but the emotions stored there need to be recognized, dealt with and released. Essential oils can cross the blood brain barrier very quickly and help those stored emotions come forward.
As a Holistic Practitioner for over 20 years, I help you find peace through dealing with the hidden, blocked and pent-up emotions we all store — tucked away in our brains, our organs and our tissues –which keep us from moving forward, or being the best we can be.
I use all my experience, knowledge and empathy to help my clients remove these roadblocks and move forward with ease, comfort and confidence.
Example 2:
The Before:
Who Am I
Im a Christian, father, coach, and recovering addict ( food sex drugs ) who wants to help other( grammar, spelling, syntax.. all as they were originally) around the world live with the abundance Christ preached about, “I have come that they may have life, and that they may have it more abundantly” John 10:10. It’s my belief that caring for our bodies, spirits, and minds is essential for living a life that is truly abundant.
Why I do this
I was like most fitness trainers who just had an interest in helping my clients lose some weight and trying to make money, until one day I walked into my mother’s bedroom and found her sitting in a chair…dead from a massive heart attack. Heart disease, and the cookies, candy, and potato chips that she was addicted to contributed to her death. After that day I dedicated myself to learning everything I could about addiction to sugar and processed food, and helping myself and others break free from food addiction and obesity.
If you are ready to take your faith out of dieting, shakes, and commercial weight loss programs and place it in God, than you have come to the right place. I am here to help you find Deliverance, Power, and Change . Hello and welcome.
The After:
The “***********”
If you are struggling with food and weight and are ready to place your faith in God instead of dieting and commercial weight loss programs, you have finally come to the right place. Welcome to the better way of living for food-addicted Christians.
My Guide Told Me His Truth
Christ said, “I have come that they may have life and that they may have it more abundantly.” (John 10:10 New King James Version) It is my belief that caring for our spirit, mind, and body is essential for living a life that is truly abundant. Struggling with food and weight keeps us from that abundance.
He Led Me to be a Guide for Others
I was a fitness trainer with a strong — but not overwhelming — interest in helping my clients lose weight until the day I found my mother dead from a massive heart attack. I know her addiction to cookies, candy, and potato chips led to the heart disease that caused her death.
That day I dedicated myself to learning everything I could about addiction to sugar and processed food, and to finding a better way of living free from food addiction and obesity.
Example 3:
The website owner wanted a short piece highlighting her authority for use in emails.
The before:
“Several years ago I took a stand that went against everything my colleagues were saying and doing.
This caused a lot of conflict and strife and people actually stopped talking to me.
So why did I do it?
I was tired of living someone else’s dream, what I was being told did not fit with my morals and beliefs and it was time to take a stand.
What did I learn from this:
- Build know like and trust relationships with your potential clients. Get to know their pain and struggles in life. What drives them? Why would they hire you?
- People don’t buy what you do, they buy the result of why you do it and what you believe. They buy the solution to their pain and struggle.
- I am the expert at shifting limiting beliefs and helping people write a better ending to their story.
- It’s important to stand for what you believe in, even when others don’t agree with you, you must follow your gut. It isn’t about them, it’s about your client and who they are and what they think.
- Don’t take it personally
- Treat your business like a business and not a hobby
So I created a simple strategy over the last 10 years to help clients shift limiting beliefs that keep them floundering through life, and help them write a better ending to their life story.”
The after:
“Many people are not living a happy, fulfilled life and they don’t know why. But they do know something isn’t right. And they don’t know where to go to get help, they may not even be able to put their dissatisfaction and emptiness into words.
I am a wellness living guide and my purpose in life is to help others find their best way forward. My struggle for self-assurance, self-confidence, and a sense of worth did not just happen, it took me years of introspection, of learning, of getting rid of beliefs that were holding me back, to be able to walk my very own path.
I use these life experiences and professional trainings to help other people find the best way to live their own lives. They may be carrying habits and beliefs they learned as a child or from peers, or even from loved ones — beliefs they may not even know they carry, which are putting up barriers to their own way forward. Beliefs that interfere with their physical well-being, their mental health, their spiritual journey, their home, and their finances.
Together we use my proven strategy to find and define new boundaries and beliefs. Together we find the path to clarity of purpose and to a life of wellness.”
Talk to me and let me know what I can help you make clearer.